ENGL062N Week 7 | General English in English - Chamberlain university

Question 2

Not yet graded / 39 pts Please revise the following paragraph by re-writing it in the space provided. You must employ the following types of revisions and will be graded on appropriately and correctly addressing the items below. Please take your time and re-check your answers as much as needed.

Revision levels you should address when re-writing the paragraph:

• Global (effectively communicating purpose and effectively writing for an audience)
• Making sure there is a clearly stated or implied purpose
• Making sure all sentences serve the stated or implied purpose
• Sentence-level (organization and flow):
• Adding transitional words and phrases where needed
• Placing sentences in proper order
• Eliminating sentences that do not belong
• Word-level (clarity, originality, and grammar)
• Replacing words that are unclear with clearer words
• Replacing repetitive wording with a variety of wording
• Removing unnecessary words
• Using the comma and apostrophe section of the Week 7 Lesson to correct errors

However, trauma can be super duper complex meaning that it may occur for several different reasons and understanding all level’s of trauma is crucial for recovery. Living in chaos refers to the environment in ones home and includes situations like alcoholic family members, a lack of structure in schedules like sleeping and eating, a tendency to move from town to town or place to place often. If you have any kind of trauma, it is probably because you have a bad family, which in turn makes you a bad person. In short, a full examination of all types of trauma must be performed if were to treat patients most effectively. Being a witness to a horrific event like a shooting or being involved in a severe accident can also have long-lasting effects that require trauma treatment for the trauma the mens and womens see that causes trauma. Another kind of trauma can occur in children when their not given the physical and mental health care they need. In short, its important to recognize all of the facets of complex trauma in order to offer the best treatment. To clarify, complex trauma is complex because there are a complex number of complex issues, such as physical, mental, or health abuse, being raised or living in a chaotic environment, and single traumatizing incidents like a car accident or witnessing a shooting. My sister saw a motorcycle accident once. The most common reaction people have when they hear the word “trauma” tend’s to be that the person has been abused in some way or that the person suffers post-combat PTSD. They can end up malnourished, developmentally stunted, or at higher risk of death from diseases. Its true that abuse is one kind of trauma that needs help; children and adults who suffer abuse will often need help to help overcome the post-trauma associated that needs help with those events, sometimes help for the rest of their lives.